蓝蓝的天空中挂着金色的太阳。金色的太阳照着大地，把大地晒得法汤。我踏着轻快的脚步回家去。
回到家里的时候，我不知道要做什么。我想了很久，决定到公园去。我喜欢到公园去，因为公园里有很多小花朵，也有很多树木。
到了公园，我走着走着，突然，我看到了好朋友，小明。他在墙壁上画画。
我问小明：“你为什么在公园的墙壁上画画？”
小明说：“因为我喜欢画画。你看！我画得多美丽啊！"
我生气地对他说：“我们因该保持公园环境的清洁和美观。你应该在纸上画画，而不是在墙壁上画画。”
小明很惭愧。小明红着脸，低着头说：“对不起，我知道错了。”
“我们快找一些布来把墙壁抹干净。”小明点了点头。
我们找到了一名清洁工人。我们向他借了一个水桶和两块布。我和小明一起抹掉墙壁上的画。从此以后，小明不再在公园里的墙壁上画画了。他知道要保持公园环境的清洁和美观。
(written by Ash, corrected by 'half past six' Mummy... those in italics are my corrected version)
Tuesday, 8 June 2010
Sunday, 6 June 2010
骑脚踏车比赛
一个晴空万里的早晨，小文约了小明到公园去骑脚踏车。小文和小明到了公园的时候，。他们看到很多人在运动，一些在跑步，一些在做早操。小文跟小明说要比赛骑脚踏车。小明马上就答应了。
比赛一开始，小文和小明拼命得骑他们的脚踏车。一些跑步的人都惊讶得看着他们。因为他们骑得很快!
小文因为比小明快，就骑快一点，心想要骑得更快。忽然，小文的脚踏车失去控制，从斜坡往下滑，撞到了一位中年妇女。她手上提着的袋子掉落地上。袋子里的东西掉了满地。
妇女骂了小文一顿。小文跟妇女道歉的时候，小明也走过来把袋子掉出来的东西都捡起来。
从这天以后，小文和小明不再在公园里比赛骑脚踏车了。因为他们知道这是一件很危险的事。
(written by Ash, corrected by 'half past six' Mummy)
Please leave some comments for the little one so that she can improve, plus boost her confidence in this language.
Thank you very much.
比赛一开始，小文和小明拼命得骑他们的脚踏车。一些跑步的人都惊讶得看着他们。因为他们骑得很快!
小文因为比小明快，就骑快一点，心想要骑得更快。忽然，小文的脚踏车失去控制，从斜坡往下滑，撞到了一位中年妇女。她手上提着的袋子掉落地上。袋子里的东西掉了满地。
妇女骂了小文一顿。小文跟妇女道歉的时候，小明也走过来把袋子掉出来的东西都捡起来。
从这天以后，小文和小明不再在公园里比赛骑脚踏车了。因为他们知道这是一件很危险的事。
(written by Ash, corrected by 'half past six' Mummy)
Please leave some comments for the little one so that she can improve, plus boost her confidence in this language.
Thank you very much.
Saturday, 30 January 2010
An Accident At The Jetty
Patrick is a boy who loved to catch crabs. On Sundays, Patrick and his dad would usually catch some crabs for dinner. Sometimes, they would have salmon and codfish too.
One day, they went to the jetty to catch some crabs. They set up the traps for ten minutes. Two other people were trying to catch crabs too! Finally, they finished setting up the traps.
They tossed the traps into the water. Patrick ran around dancing and singing. He was as happy as a lark! They waited for one hour and pulled out a trap. Sure enough, there was a crab waiting for them. They waited another hour and pulled out the second trap. In the second trap, there was a crab too!
Patrick was very happy. He liked the crab in the first trap. He pointed at it and his finger was very near to the crab's pinchers. Suddenly, the crab pinched him. He screamed! He screamed so loudly that people driving on the road could hear him. Everyone was shocked!
Patrick's dad washed his wound with plain drinking water. After that, his dad put some medicine on it and put a plaster on his wound. Patrick felt better.
Patrick did not want to catch crabs ever again. His dad also did not want to catch crabs again. They learned a valuable lesson. Then learned not to point directly at crabs and also not to go too near to them.
(Written by Ash, typed by Mummy)
One day, they went to the jetty to catch some crabs. They set up the traps for ten minutes. Two other people were trying to catch crabs too! Finally, they finished setting up the traps.
They tossed the traps into the water. Patrick ran around dancing and singing. He was as happy as a lark! They waited for one hour and pulled out a trap. Sure enough, there was a crab waiting for them. They waited another hour and pulled out the second trap. In the second trap, there was a crab too!
Patrick was very happy. He liked the crab in the first trap. He pointed at it and his finger was very near to the crab's pinchers. Suddenly, the crab pinched him. He screamed! He screamed so loudly that people driving on the road could hear him. Everyone was shocked!
Patrick's dad washed his wound with plain drinking water. After that, his dad put some medicine on it and put a plaster on his wound. Patrick felt better.
Patrick did not want to catch crabs ever again. His dad also did not want to catch crabs again. They learned a valuable lesson. Then learned not to point directly at crabs and also not to go too near to them.
(Written by Ash, typed by Mummy)
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